What you think of this?

Overall it's OK. Not Shakespeare, but a good romantic poem. Watch word choice. If you're going to use vernacular like "cuz" then "strife" isn't a good fit. Also, words like "reproduced" sound too scientific for a poem of this type. Work on choosing words that suit the sound of the poem. Some of the phrases don't make much sense to me. I don't know how advice can be "endearing."